collapse
2020 Donation Drive

It's time for our annual Server Donation Drive! We need to raise at least $710 to keep The Cauldron's server online for another year. Please help! Either hit that Paypal button to the right and make a one-time donation in any amount or set up a monthly Bronze, Silver or Gold Donor subscription. You can find more info in this message!

Donations as of 29 October 2020: $610 donated. Only $100 more needed! Thank you, donors!


Note: This total is updated manually, usually once a day


* Recent Posts

Re: Have you ever enchanted a pumpkin? by Aisling
[Yesterday at 08:31:54 pm]


Re: NaNoWriMo time! by Aisling
[Yesterday at 07:52:25 pm]


Have you ever enchanted a pumpkin? by Sefiru
[Yesterday at 06:59:20 pm]


Re: NaNoWriMo time! by Sefiru
[Yesterday at 06:50:35 pm]


Re: Recently Blogged by Kylara
[Yesterday at 03:55:20 pm]

Author Topic: Another poem for Sarasvati  (Read 647 times)

Redfaery

  • Grand Master Member
  • *******
  • Join Date: Dec 2013
  • Posts: 1345
  • Total likes: 40
    • View Profile
Another poem for Sarasvati
« on: May 20, 2014, 05:20:46 pm »
So...it looks like the other two top threads in this forum are poems to Sarasvati. Sorry!

Also, my apologies to RuachHaKodesh9 for the use of water imagery in this poem....I know you used it in yours too.:ashamed:

GIVE ME WATER

Maha Sarasvati Ma, give me water,
Loosen the knots that tie my tongue.
Let the words trapped inside flow from me,
Sarasvati, mother, master, lover.

I have a song inside to sing for you.
Give me water, Maha Sarasvati Ma.
Mother, master, lover, queen.
Let me sing of you; give me water.

Maha Sarasvati Ma, pour your water down on me.
Let it wash away my tangled thoughts.
Set the words inside me free; Sarasvati, mother, master, dream.
I will sing for you, pour down your water on me!
KARMA: You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means.

RuachHaKodesh9

  • Sr. Apprentice
  • ****
  • Join Date: May 2014
  • Posts: 78
  • Total likes: 0
    • View Profile
    • http://www.findingthegoddessundermynose.blogspot.com
Re: Another poem for Sarasvati
« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2014, 11:15:13 pm »
Quote from: Redfaery;148121
So...it looks like the other two top threads in this forum are poems to Sarasvati. Sorry!

Also, my apologies to RuachHaKodesh9 for the use of water imagery in this poem....I know you used it in yours too.:ashamed:

GIVE ME WATER

Maha Sarasvati Ma, give me water,
Loosen the knots that tie my tongue.
Let the words trapped inside flow from me,
Sarasvati, mother, master, lover.

I have a song inside to sing for you.
Give me water, Maha Sarasvati Ma.
Mother, master, lover, queen.
Let me sing of you; give me water.

Maha Sarasvati Ma, pour your water down on me.
Let it wash away my tangled thoughts.
Set the words inside me free; Sarasvati, mother, master, dream.
I will sing for you, pour down your water on me!

 
No apologies necessary. This is gorgeous. Heart-close-to-the-tongue, stunningly gorgeous. :-)
"...for if that which you seek, you find not within yourself, you will never find it without."
-Charge of the Goddess, adapted by Starhawk

"It is enough to rest in your love. It is enough to taste your goodness. It is enough to call you by name. It is enough. It is enough"
-Joyce Rupp

Tags:
 

Related Topics

  Subject / Started by Replies Last post
1 Replies
1440 Views
Last post July 12, 2011, 11:59:51 pm
by SunflowerP
1 Replies
1011 Views
Last post August 26, 2012, 05:47:11 pm
by RandallS
6 Replies
1305 Views
Last post December 15, 2012, 12:35:11 pm
by Sophia C
5 Replies
702 Views
Last post March 29, 2014, 09:04:20 am
by Redfaery
2 Replies
741 Views
Last post April 30, 2014, 10:23:04 am
by Redfaery

* Who's Online

  • Dot Guests: 48
  • Dot Hidden: 0
  • Dot Users: 0

There aren't any users online.

* Please Donate!

The Cauldron's server is expensive and requires monthly payments. Please become a Bronze, Silver or Gold Donor if you can. Donations are needed every month. Without member support, we can't afford the server.

* Shop & Support TC

The links below are affiliate links. When you click on one of these links you will go to the listed shopping site with The Cauldron's affiliate code. Any purchases you make during your visit will earn TC a tiny percentage of your purchase price at no extra cost to you.

* In Memoriam

Chavi (2006)
Elspeth (2010)
Marilyn (2013)

* Cauldron Staff

Host:
Sunflower

Message Board Staff
Board Coordinator:
Darkhawk

Assistant Board Coordinator:
Aster Breo

Senior Staff:
Aisling, Jenett, Sefiru

Staff:
Allaya, Chatelaine, EclecticWheel, HarpingHawke, Kylara, PerditaPickle, rocquelaire

Discord Chat Staff
Chat Coordinator:
Morag

Cauldron Council:
Bob, Catja, Emma-Eldritch, Fausta, Jubes, Kelly, LyricFox, Phouka, Sperran, Star, Steve, Tana

Site Administrator:
Randall

SimplePortal 2.3.6 © 2008-2014, SimplePortal