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A story about a girl
« on: September 13, 2016, 10:01:13 pm »
This is a story, it’s not a remarkable tail. But it is about a girl, a girl that does remarkable things. But those things…she cannot talk about…

This girl has…an average life, or so it would seem, with her beloved. Together they work hard to pay for a house, keep the bills paid, and still have time for coffee every Saturday and Sunday morning, it’s a very important tradition. They sit out on the veranda, and just talk about how they slept, or what they could do that day or they just watch the birds come and go as they would. This girl is an artist, she is kind and caring, she has a big heart, and she loves to much, cares to much about  people she’s let into her heart. That was betrayed a few times, her trust was betrayed. She doesn’t trust as easily now, and sometimes she is a little paranoid.

This girl, her upbringing was probably worse then some, better then others, and maybe about the same for a few. It’s not important to point out the details, but she wouldn’t change anything in her past because she wouldn’t be who she was if not for her past, and she likes who she is as a person, even though, she doesn’t like herself, if that makes any sense. She is afraid of becoming arrogant so she doesn’t admit if she is good at something; in fact, she doesn’t think she’s good at much of anything (unless she’s doing that thing and needs to think that way). This girl can do amazing things. Things that….most people can only dream of, but she can’t tell most people.

There are a few kinds of people in this girl’s life. The people she knows that are more like acquaintances, they are more like the general populace, not knowing if you trust them much. There are friends she cares for/about. They have some trust, trust enough to talk about certain life issues and to hang out with and such. Then there’s the fewer trusted friends that can be told nearly everything that she would have on her mind, that she can do, and such like that. Then there’s the very few who, she feels she can tell anything to, no matter what it is. Lastly, there’s those that fit into that same category of very trusted, but not exactly the same. There are a many things she wouldn’t talk about with these e she couldn’t handle the rejection, disappointment or desertion she could get from revealing such information.

She’s done things, helped people in ways that she cannot explain. People have told her that she has helped, sometimes she doesn’t believe them. Sometimes people want to repay her for her help, but she doesn’t want repayment, she wants those people to help other people. she wants to make everything ok, even if it means one person at a time. She can’t give money, but she does what she can. She tries to right some imaginary wrong that she thinks is her fault, and tries to “save everyone,” not believing that a person can’t save everyone. She will try until She’s even to tired to move. She wishes she was a better person, for those she cares so deeply for…and she is severely disappointed in herself that…she cannot talk to many people, even those that she loves. She tries and tries to get out whatever she thinks about…but she cannot get it to leave her mouth (fearing she would sound stupid, or say something wrong). She ends up giving up after ten minutes.

There’s…so many things that this girl would say…if she could bring herself to say it. All she’s been through, all she’s done, does, and will do…but for now, a story will have to do…Maybe one day, the girl will have a name too….
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Re: A story about a girl
« Reply #1 on: January 05, 2017, 11:52:01 pm »
Quote from: Voren;196234
This is a story, it’s not a remarkable tail. But it is about a girl, a girl that does remarkable things. But those things…she cannot talk about…

This girl has…an average life, or so it would seem, with her beloved. Together they work hard to pay for a house, keep the bills paid, and still have time for coffee every Saturday and Sunday morning, it’s a very important tradition. They sit out on the veranda, and just talk about how they slept, or what they could do that day or they just watch the birds come and go as they would. This girl is an artist, she is kind and caring, she has a big heart, and she loves to much, cares to much about  people she’s let into her heart. That was betrayed a few times, her trust was betrayed. She doesn’t trust as easily now, and sometimes she is a little paranoid.

This girl, her upbringing was probably worse then some, better then others, and maybe about the same for a few. It’s not important to point out the details, but she wouldn’t change anything in her past because she wouldn’t be who she was if not for her past, and she likes who she is as a person, even though, she doesn’t like herself, if that makes any sense. She is afraid of becoming arrogant so she doesn’t admit if she is good at something; in fact, she doesn’t think she’s good at much of anything (unless she’s doing that thing and needs to think that way). This girl can do amazing things. Things that….most people can only dream of, but she can’t tell most people.

There are a few kinds of people in this girl’s life. The people she knows that are more like acquaintances, they are more like the general populace, not knowing if you trust them much. There are friends she cares for/about. They have some trust, trust enough to talk about certain life issues and to hang out with and such. Then there’s the fewer trusted friends that can be told nearly everything that she would have on her mind, that she can do, and such like that. Then there’s the very few who, she feels she can tell anything to, no matter what it is. Lastly, there’s those that fit into that same category of very trusted, but not exactly the same. There are a many things she wouldn’t talk about with these e she couldn’t handle the rejection, disappointment or desertion she could get from revealing such information.

She’s done things, helped people in ways that she cannot explain. People have told her that she has helped, sometimes she doesn’t believe them. Sometimes people want to repay her for her help, but she doesn’t want repayment, she wants those people to help other people. she wants to make everything ok, even if it means one person at a time. She can’t give money, but she does what she can. She tries to right some imaginary wrong that she thinks is her fault, and tries to “save everyone,” not believing that a person can’t save everyone. She will try until She’s even to tired to move. She wishes she was a better person, for those she cares so deeply for…and she is severely disappointed in herself that…she cannot talk to many people, even those that she loves. She tries and tries to get out whatever she thinks about…but she cannot get it to leave her mouth (fearing she would sound stupid, or say something wrong). She ends up giving up after ten minutes.

There’s…so many things that this girl would say…if she could bring herself to say it. All she’s been through, all she’s done, does, and will do…but for now, a story will have to do…Maybe one day, the girl will have a name too….
I really love this

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